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"You idiot. You bleeding DUMMKOPF! Can't you tell that it broke her
heart to?! Du bist einein hitzkopf! You are so blind! Why the heck did
you just yell at her? She was trying to explain but you, having the
thickest skull in the universe, wouldn't listen!"            

~~~

Ludwig's POV

Ludwig stared at his brother, now even more confused.

"Then why?" Ludwig could hear Gilbert sigh in exasperation.

"Did you know her parents got divorced and her mom remarried?" Gilbert asked.

"No, why?"

"Well, she married an Indian guy who is very traditional and holds to ALL of the old traditions. And, unfortately, _____'s mother completely agrees with him."

"What are you talking about?"

"_____ was in India for a couple weeks to meet her stepfather's family."

"Just get to the point. Stop jumping 'round the bush, bruder." Ludwig growled.

"There was another reason they went to India. ______'s stepfather wanted to set up an arranged marriage for ______ to some indian kid for when they were thirty or something." (the truth is OUT)

"Wait what?!?" Ludwig stared at Gilbert with his mouth open.

"What are you asking me for. Go ask _______. She was crying her eyes out becuase you were being a dummkopf." Gilbert said. Ludwig stared at him for a moment. "Geh! Jetzt!" Ludwig ran out of the room and thundered down the stairs.


Ludwig slammed the front door behind him and looked around, thinking. Where would ____ have gone? And then he remembered. Of course, _____ favorite place to go. The park.


~time skip to the park~ (if you want you can skip there too but not right now)

Your pov maybe but not really. im not sure

It had started to rain lightly by the time Ludwig had gotten to the park. He walked to the place he knew you would be and sure enough, you were. Sitting under the tree where you had taken a picture on your last birthday. Ludwig walked over and crouched before you.

"______" He whispered. You looked up. Tears streaked your face. You looked at him with surprise. "Das tut mir aber leid, Frau. Ich bin einen dummkopf." You looked at him confused. You didn't understand. Ludwig understood your look and explained. "I'm so sorry. I was an idiot. Gilbert told me about India."

"You're not mad anymore?" You asked tentatively, lifting your head from your knees and crossing your legs.

"How could I be, Frau?" Ludwig moved closer and cupped your face in his large hand. "I'm so sorry, ______. Can you forgive me?" The look in Ludwig's eyes was so fragile that you nearly started crying again.

"Of course I forgive you." Ludwig looked down for a moment. "What is it?"

"I don't deserve you. I realize that now." Ludwig said with a short laugh. "You are so perfect and I am....." his voice stated to fill with self disgust. "ein Schwein." He looked back into your eyes. "I really don't deserve you. You are to good for me." Ludwig paused for a moment. "But... will you take me back?"

"Of course, dummkopf!" You smiled. Ludwig's eyes lit up.

"Wirklich?"

"Of course!" Ludwig leaned forward and kissed you. You wound your hands into his wet blond hair and pulled him down on top of you. His chest pressed against yours as you continued to kiss. Ludwig pulled away for a moment and kissed jaw. You giggled.

"Behave," You pretended to chide him. So obviously, Ludwig did....not. He wrapped on arm around your waist and tangled the other in your hair. His mouth skimmed over yours jaw and then down the side of your neck. You gasped slightly and felt him smile against your skin. He pulled back and looked at you. His blue eyes were sparkling. He leaned down to kiss you again.


"Ich liebe dich, _______"

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SQUEEEEEE!!!!!!! i <3 Ludwig.

aren't you so happy now!!!!!

its over. no more sad parts.

no it is my time to give a slight rant. for all those hetalia fanpeople who write fanfic fluff about germany (and gilbert sortof b/c its a german speaking place)
in germany, it is so not like it is here. they do not say i love pizza, i love this, i love that. they do not even say it to their parents. and if you are german and you have a crush on someone and they finally admit to you that they like you too. you wouldn't say i love you. b/c they don't throw it around like us stupid americans. if you have been dating someone for a long time and you really do love them, actually truely, not just i like like you, then obviously, you would say it. (in this ludwig and you were going of for a year before this, so its ok.) sorry for that rant. its just that i have read some fics where they use ich leibe dich like americans. if your one of those people, sorry, its nothing personal!!! it just that i like german things to be actually german not amaricanish pretending to be german.
sorry if i just hurt anyones feeling :(

anyway.

should i do a prologue??? anyone. with more kissing, obviously. and possibly proposal????
tells me if i should (awkward. i meant epilogue. the thingy that after the main story :P )

if not thats the end.

part 1 [link]
part 5 [link]

epilogue [link]

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:iconchirikomasashi:
~ChirikoMasashi Sep 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Epilogue? I would love to!!!
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:iconnightwing6497:
there is one but u can
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:iconfanfictiongurl334:
So how'd my 'Dad' take it?
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:iconnightwing6497:
well theres nothing he can really do about it. b/c gilbert pointed out that you were turning 18 soon so you would be an adult and its america so its free country so you could do watever you wanted
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:iconnightwing6497:
but he was not happy
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:iconyuuki226:
~Yuuki226 Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
DO AN EPILOUGE!!!! Pweaseeeeeeeeeeee~ *puppy dog eyes*
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:iconnightwing6497:
in the process right now
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:iconneko-neko-nyan:
prologue prologe make a prologue *in hungarys wispery "Give back austrias happy place" Voice*
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